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Read my mind

Another bus

There is nothing I feel for you,

You are no longer my baby blue.

I am sorry to feel this way,

I swear I wanted to stay.

Things change so rapidly,

It is not a big psychology.

You could not give me what I needed,

I often felt like being cheated.

I still care for you in a way,

As a friend if you know what I would like to say.

It did not work out for us,

Now we both should catch another bus.

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September 2, 2011 - Posted by | Poetry | ,

6 Comments »

  1. heartfelt words.
    wow.

    Comment by The Orange Tree | October 7, 2011 | Reply

  2. Very nicely done. Love the last line!

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/05/treasure/

    Comment by charlesmashburn | October 7, 2011 | Reply

  3. I still care for you in a way, like a friend: those are the words no man wants to hear, but it makes for an interesting poem.

    Comment by Mike Patrick | October 7, 2011 | Reply

  4. when you break up, you keep wondering if you will ever see the person again, and what will happen if you do…

    my entry

    http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/triolet-vi/

    Comment by Bat-Ami Gordin | October 9, 2011 | Reply

  5. thoughtful sentiments,

    fun ending lines,

    not work for us,
    catch bus.

    🙂

    Comment by The Noiseless Cuckooclock | October 11, 2011 | Reply

  6. sad, but well written.. those last words are some that no one likes to hear!

    Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

    Comment by Leo | October 12, 2011 | Reply


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