Another bus
There is nothing I feel for you,
You are no longer my baby blue.
I am sorry to feel this way,
I swear I wanted to stay.
Things change so rapidly,
It is not a big psychology.
You could not give me what I needed,
I often felt like being cheated.
I still care for you in a way,
As a friend if you know what I would like to say.
It did not work out for us,
Now we both should catch another bus.
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heartfelt words.
wow.
Very nicely done. Love the last line!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/05/treasure/
I still care for you in a way, like a friend: those are the words no man wants to hear, but it makes for an interesting poem.
when you break up, you keep wondering if you will ever see the person again, and what will happen if you do…
my entry
http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/triolet-vi/
thoughtful sentiments,
fun ending lines,
not work for us,
catch bus.
sad, but well written.. those last words are some that no one likes to hear!
Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason